Re: iSCSI: Small editorial update

["Julian Satran" <Julian_Satran@il.ibm.com>]

OK - Julo


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Julian,
I think we need to add a clause that denotes that a bi-directional command
is being addressed in the second paragraph under 9.7.5 in your working
draft 14.  We should add the expression ", in the context of bidirectional
commands, ".  The following would be the revised paragraph.

"R2T and Data-In PDUs, in the context of bi-directional commands, share the
numbering sequence (see Section 2.2.2.3 Data Sequencing)."

I know it should be obvious when one really thinks about it, however,  it
make the intent easier to understand.

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