iSCSI:Typo in draft 16?

["KRUEGER,MARJORIE (HP-Roseville,ex1)" <marjorie_krueger@hp.com>]

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From: Julian Satran [mailto:Julian_Satran@il.ibm.com]
Sent: Tuesday, September 10, 2002 11:38 PM
To: KRUEGER,MARJORIE (HP-Roseville,ex1)
Cc: Black_David@emc.com; Elizabeth.G.Rodriguez@123mail.net; John Hufferd
Subject: RE: iSCSI:Typo in draft 16

Thanks - Julo

"KRUEGER,MARJORIE (HP-Roseville,ex1)" <marjorie_krueger@hp.com> 11/09/02 01:23

To:        Julian Satran/Haifa/IBM@IBMIL         cc:                 Subject:        RE: iSCSI:Typo in draft 16

Oop, forgot to add:
Is the pagination off?  The first page break seems to come too early, but maybe that's deliberate.
 
The indentation got messed up between page 38 and page 39 - the 3rd, 4th 5th bullets have different indentation from the first two bullets.  

Hi Julian

Assuming that you make changes due to IETF last call, can you correct this item?  I think there's a typo in sec. 2.2.6.3.1  "Type "iqn." (iSCSI Qualified Name)"

 The 5th bullet items says

"An optional colon (:), or prefixed string within the character set and
                      ^^^^^
length boundaries that the owner of the domain name deems appropriate. "
 
I think the ", or" is a typo?  If the string is present, it must be prefixed by a ":"  The current wording leave the impression that the ":" is optional.

Regards,
Marjorie Krueger
Networked Storage Architecture
Networked Storage Solutions
Hewlett-Packard