iSCSI: A couple of definitions

[Luben Tuikov <luben@splentec.com>]

1. CID: The second sentence refers to ``this connection''
and there doesn't seem to be any connections in context.

Since ``within'' is used as a preposition, shouldn't the
sentence read as follows:

  It is a unique ID identifying a connection within
  the session for the initiator.

2. iSCSI Transfer Direction: ``with regard to'' has
identical meaning to ``with respect to''. But isn't
``with respect to'' more common in mathematical and
computer science literature, and ``with regard to''
being more common in the humanities and social sciences?
Shouldn't the first sentence read:

  The iSCSI transfer direction is defined with respect
  to the initiator.

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-l