Section 5 says:
a key=value in the data part of one of the following Login
or Text
Response or Request.
The declension does not seem to be
correct. It would sound better if it had
the word PDUs added to the end. (the phrase "one
of the following" implies plural).
a key=value in the data part of one of the following Login
or Text
Response or Request PDUs.
Section 10.12.4
Says we can't use
version 0? This is really going to be bad because so much has been released
that way. Why not just say min=0 and max=1?
Section
13.
TCP
port number for iSCSI connections assigned by IANA is 860
and this port can be used with an override.
Can someone clue me in as to
what an "override" is and how I determine when I should use it?
Eddy
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From: Julian Satran
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Subject: Fw: iSCSI - Errata - to
20
This was sent during a list hiatus - Julo
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Dear all,
As
I promised (with a slight delay) the iSCSI draft-20 + errata (that we intend to
insert just before publication as an RFC) is on my site (at
http://www.haifa.il.ibm.com/satran/ips/)
Things
fixed:
-several
editorial glitches (wording, typos)
-version
raised to 0x01 (that was agreed/dictated on the list to happen when RFC is
issued to distinguish RFC-level from pre RFC level).
-IESG
required text for CHAP administrative domains
-clarifying
that some chap keys that can have in theory an arbitrary number of bits have in
iSCSI a length that is a multiple of 8bits
-clarifying
that TargetPortalGroup does not have to be returned in some cases
-the
UA related text for abort (in both relevant places)
-references
-port
numbers (default unchanged but can be overridden with the system port 860)
Please
have look and comment (before we say good bye :-))
Julo
P.S.
- I do not know when the RFC is going to show up but it should not be long
