Re: IPS-ALL: Four WG Last Calls

[Narsimha Reddy CH <creddy@npd.hcltech.com>]

Hi All,


   The following are a few comments regarding the scsi-mib,


1)  In the following description about scsiDscTgtTable, the description
    needs to be changed,

    Instead of "authorized" we need to use "configured". Since the group 
    discoveded consists of either the "discovered" or "configured" devices.

--******************** Discovered Target group ****************** 
   scsiRemoteTarget OBJECT IDENTIFIER ::= { scsiInitiator 4 } 
    
   -- Targets discovered or authorized (configured) to attach each of the initiator 
                            ^^^^^^^^^^^
   -- ports of each initiator device of each instance.  
    
   scsiDscTgtTable OBJECT-TYPE 
     SYNTAX         SEQUENCE OF ScsiDscTgtEntry 
     MAX-ACCESS      not-accessible 
     STATUS          current 
     DESCRIPTION 
          "This table includes all the remote (not in the local system) 
          target ports that are authorized (configured) to attach to each
                                ^^^^^^^^^^^
          local initiator port of this SCSI instance." 
     ::= { scsiRemoteTarget 1 }     



2) In section 11, parallel scsi population example

11.10 scsiAttTgtPort Table:    

   Since in parallel scsi ports have only identifiers,
not names, so we need to mention the fields corresponding to port names
as "-NA-" ( Not Applicable) instead of empty strings as follows,


     scsiAttTgtPortName              ""    <------------- "-NA-"

Since in other tables, where port names are present the corresponding 
value is "-NA-". Since in order to maintaining consistency everywhere we
have to change this to "-NA-".


Simillarly for 11.12 scsiTgtPort Table:
                   
      Attribute                       Value 
      ----------                      ------ 
      scsiInstIndex                   1 
      scsiDeviceIndex                 2 
      scsiPortIndex                   2 
      scsiPortName                    ""  <------------- "-NA-" 


      Sorry for the really late comments.


Thanks,
- Narsimha Reddy CH





Black_David@emc.com wrote:
> 
> All,
> 
> We would like to announce IPS Working Group Last Calls for
> the four remaining IPS WG drafts that need a WG Last Call.
> Due to the IETF meeting week and Thanksgiving holidays, these
> WG Last Calls will run for more than the usual two weeks.
> 
> Details:
> 
> (1) Document: Internet Storage Name Service (iSNS)
> URL: http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-ips-isns-14.txt
> Note: This document has been through one WG Last Call.  All technical
>         issues are believed to be resolved, but the resulting extensive
>         text changes warrant another WG Last Call.  The primary purpose
>         of this second WG Last Call is to check that issues raised in
>         the first WG Last Call have been resolved satisfactorily.
> 
> Last call period: 3 Weeks
> Submit comments no later than: Monday, December 9, 2002 at 5pm EST
> Editor:  Josh Tseng <jtseng@nishansystems.com>
> 
> (2) Document: Finding iSCSI Targets and Name Servers Using SLP
> URL: http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-ips-iscsi-slp-04.txt
> 
> Last call period: 3 Weeks
> Submit comments no later than: Monday, December 9, 2002 at 5pm EST
> Editor:  Mark Bakke <mbakke@cisco.com>
> Note: This document has too many authors.  A -05 version will be
>         needed to reduce the author count.
> 
> (3) Document: Definitions of Managed Objects for iSNS
>         (Internet Storage Name Service)
> URL: http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-ips-isns-mib-02.txt
> 
> Last call period: 3 Weeks
> Submit comments no later than: Monday, December 9, 2002 at 5pm EST
> Editor:  Kevin Gibbons <kgibbons@nishansystems.com>
> 
> (4) Document: Definition of Managed Objects for SCSI Entities
> URL: http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-ips-scsi-mib-04.txt
> 
> Last call period: 3 Weeks
> Submit comments no later than: Monday, December 9, 2002 at 5pm EST
> Editor:  Michele Hallak-Stamler <michele@sanrad.com>
> 
> Please submit editorial comments directly to the appropriate document
> editor, with a copy to David Black (black_david@emc.com), and Elizabeth
> Rodriguez (erodrigu@brocade.com).  Submit technical comments to the IPS
> mailing list (ips@ece.cmu.edu)
> 
> Editorial comments may be resolved directly by the editor of the document,
> but any technical issues must be discussed on the IPS reflector.
> 
> Thanks,
> David Black & Elizabeth Rodriguez
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> 
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