A couple of syntax errors in working draft

[Carlos Rimola <crimola@silverbacksystems.com>]

Hello list,  

Here are a couple of syntax errors discovered in
working-draft-16:

(1)
2.2.4.3 Tags and integrity checks

(2nd paragraph, top of page 37):

As the Initiator Task Tag is used to
identify a task during its execution
the iSCSI initiator and target MUST verify that all other
fields used in task related PDUs have values are consistent with 
the
                                         
^^^^^
I believe the third line should have a "that" to read
"have values that are consistent..."


(2)
8.3 iSCSI timeouts


(3rd paragraph on page 124):

The relation between iSCSI timeouts and SCSI timeouts should also 
be
considered. SCSI timeouts should be longer than iSCSI timeouts plus
the time required for iSCSI recovery whenever iSCSI recovery is
planned. Alternatively an implementer may choose to interlock iSCSI
timeouts and recovery with SCSI timeouts so that SCSI will recovery
                                                     
^^^^
will become active only where iSCSI is not planned to or failed to
recover.


The "will" between SCSI and recovery should be
removed.


Carlos Rimola
Silverback Systems


At 11:00 PM 8/22/2002 +0300, Julian Satran wrote:

> thanks - Julo
>
>
> "Anshul Chadda" <achadda@trebia.com> 
> Sent by: owner-ips@ece.cmu.edu 
>
> 08/22/2002 05:57 PM 
> Please respond to "Anshul Chadda" 
>         
>         To:        <ips@ece.cmu.edu> 
>         cc:         
>         Subject:        typo in Appendix D SendTargets Operation 
>
>         
>
> Hi all: 
>
> In Appendix D, page 254, in the following paragraph there is an extra "not" after MUST NOT. I think it is a typo. 
>
> "A SendTargets response MUST NOT not contain target names if there are no targets for the requesting initiator to access." 
>
> Thanks, 
>   
> Anshul Chadda 
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